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__Psychological and social education __ Psychological and social education for children is also very important to provide a healthy life. It is believed that children act the way their parents or surrounding adults behave by observing and learning from them. Therefore it is crucial for adults and school teachers to educate and encourage a non-stressful and pro-social life to the children. Stress is one of the psychological matters that negatively affect health. It is stated that “there was a significant relationship between daily stress and the occurrence of both concurrent and subsequent health problems…” (DeLongis & Folkman & Lazarus, 1988). Additionally, maintaining strong and trustworthy interpersonal relationship is the major aspect of conserving social health as House, Landis, and Umberson (1988) explains that having poor or not enough social relationships tends to increase the risk of death. Stress could be retained by reducing the amount of workload from school and minimised pressure from parents’ high expectations. Advocating children of flexible social relationship can be induced by parents and teachers giving interest, and then giving advice to the child’s social life. In this way, children will learn how to cope as they grow up and stay morally healthy. Therefore if adults play a great role in socially educating children, they will be able to enjoy a more psychologically healthier life.

__Reference list: __ DeLongis, A., & Folkman, S., & Richard, S. (1988). The impact of daily stress on health and mood: Psychological and social resources as mediators. //Journal of Personality and Social psychology, 54, 486-495.// Retrieved March 13, 2011, from the PsycARTICLES database. House, J. S., & Landis, K. R., & umberson, D. (1988). Social relationships and health. //Science Magazine 241(4865).// Retrieved March 13, 2011, from: http://www.sciencemag.org/content/241/4865/540.short Daisy: hi....the last sentence, "then an advice to the child's... i think the word then need to change to another word,such as give ... :p ﻿ ﻿Eunice: Ooh yes I get what you mean i will edit that bit.

Fatima: "It is stated that “there was a significant relationship between daily stress and the occurrence of both concurrent and subsequent health problems…” (DeLongis & Folkman & Lazarus, 1988) Additionally, maintaining strong and trustworthy interpersonal relationship is the major aspect of conserving social health as House, Landis, and Umberson (1988) explains that having poor or not enough social relationships tends to increase the risk of death" Is this only one sentence?! its so long. every tthing else is explained very well :D

Eunice : fixed it with a full stop :) Eunice: Iv'e added another sentence at the end