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Finally, films are also a sound form of ingredient for developing creativity. The creativity can be cultivated by appropriate stimulations from outside. A film as an audio-visual media, it stimulates most senses that human being has. This process provides brain with abundant motivations and makes people feel intrigued. Moreover, Films offer opportunities to experience extreme worlds of imagination. Before ‘Star wars’ and ‘The Lord of the Ring’ were released, many people could not posit that it could be embodied. However, with advances in technology in media industry, the preposterous imaginations have been shaped into a real object. According to Anderson(2001), creativity can be manifested by fantasy and imagination. Thus, it is definite that films encourage cognitive development. Apart from these during-viewing activities, after-viewing activities also play a pivotal role to raise creativity. Media contents frequently serves as proper topics for post-viewing discussion. Through sharing thoughts with friends or families, people can broaden their horizon which leads to growth of creativity. Furthermore, some other active form of devotions such as making comments and searching related issues with the movie bring positive impact on cognitive fluency.

Finally, __films are__ also a sound form of ingredient for developing people creativity. The creativity can be cultivated by appropriate stimulations from outside. A film as an audio-visual media, it stimulates most senses that human being has. This process provides brain with abundant motivations and makes it for people to feel intriguing. ( and makes people feel intrigued? ) Moreover, __Films offer (offers) __opportunities to experience extreme worlds of imagination. Before ‘Star wars’ and ‘The Lord of the Ring’ was (were) released, many people could not posit that it could be embodied. However, with advances in technology in media industry, the preposterous imaginations have been shaped a ( into real objects) real object. According to Anderson(2001), creativity can be manifested by fantasy and imagination. Thus, it is definite that films encourage cognitive development. Apart from these during-viewing activities, after-viewing activities also play a pivotal role to raise creativity. Media contents frequently serves as proper topics for post-viewing discussion. Through sharing thoughts with friends or families, people can broaden their horizon and this led to growth of creativity. Furthermore, some other active form of devotions such as making comments and searching related issues with the movie bring positive impact on cognitive fluency.

__Reference__ Anderson, D. R. (2001). V. Creativity; Monograghs of the society for research in child development. //Blackwell publishing//, //66//(1), 67. Retrieved May 14, 2011, from the EBSCOhost database.

Jihye : Ah, Should I have a in-text reference? Thank you for letting me know.:) And, is there any grammar error? I am not sure about that. :)
 * Christina: Good paragraph but I don't see any in-text reference. But, otherwise, good information. **

Francisca : Hey! i took the liberty of adding some notes on your paragraph, hope you don't mind :)

**Christina:** Hello again. In the first sentence 'ingredient for developing people creativity', I think it will be better if you took the 'PEOPLE' out. Also, second to last sentence, 'people can broaden their horizon and this led to growth of creativity', it will be better to say 'people can broaden their horizon WHICH leads to growth of creativity.' Other than that, good information again. Well done =] Jihye: thatk you so much for the valuable comments, you girls! :) However, I have a question. 'films' is a plural or singlar? I thought it was a plural word cause it meant each films that we could watch. But is it a singlar as a genre of arts? I am confused cause I am not good at english so far.:) I will appriciate if you guys answer it so nicely. ;). Thank you! **﻿Francisca:** Hey! i just read your question and in my opinion depends exclusively of the context, for example if you say " I love watching good films, it is one of my favourite activities" __watching films__ counts as singular because "watching" is an action but, if you say " I love that director, his films are so amazing"... count as plural . I think that in this case if you say **FILMS OFFER** it is just fine :D
 * Christina: ** Yes, I agree with Francisca with the films offer part. Jihye, we actually need to complete this by this week. So after writing out the paragraph again please go to 'Final Draft of Essay' and post your last paragraph. Thank you.