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Similar with art, developing creative skills through music brings several sensations as well. Children, in their young age, begin their education at a kindergarten. They will be able to get in contact with words, numbers, teachers, and friends. But music time or singing time would have to be one of the most exciting sessions. Through music children are able to develop their communicating skills, listening skills, and most of all creative skills. Creative skills are developed through various aspects of music; rhythm, tempo, volume, and style. With these four aspects, children will start to use their fore-brain by thinking of various patterns in making their own melody or sound; this connects to composing. Composing would be the main source in developing the child's creative skills. Moreover, children should be regarded of having a special personality, which they have the freedom to make conclusions and decisions. Connecting this to music, learning to compose would be the best solution (Finney, 2011). Overall, by developing creative skills through music at a young age, it will help the child's later years in school with writing and thinking and their future lives as an adult through communication with other people and in forming their lives.

Hey Christina, Francisca here :) in the seconde sentence after the second comma says : begin their education at A kindergarten... Would it be better if you just say at kindergarten? and ditch the "a"? **Christina:** Oh okay. Thank you. I'll change it after I get a comment from Jihye.

Jihye: Hi, Chrisitna, well done.:) You did such a good job, so it was cautious to make a comment. However, just in my opinion, in the third sentence "Through music children are able to develop their communicating skills, listening skills, and most of all creative skill",, 'communicating skills' and 'listening skills' appear to have less relation with the following sentence and your whole paragraph. And in addition, the idea about how arts can develop communication skills needs many explaination only for itself. So, I think it would make your paragraph more stronger and clearer if you write such as "Through music children are able to develop their most of all creative skills." :).

Thirdly, similar with art, developing creative skills through music brings several sensations as well. Children, in their young age, begin their education at kindergarten. They will be able to get in contact with words, numbers, teachers, and friends. But music time or singing time would have to be one of the most exciting sessions. Through music children are able to develop their communicating skills, listening skills, and most of all creative skills. Creative skills are developed through various aspects of music; rhythm, tempo, volume, and style. With these four aspects, children will start to use their fore-brain by thinking of various patterns in making their own melody or sound; this connects to composing. Composing would be the main source in developing the child's creative skills. Moreover, children should be regarded of having a special personality, which they have the freedom to make conclusions and decisions. Connecting this to music, learning to compose would be the best solution (Finney, 2011). Overall, by developing creative skills through music at a young age, it will help the child's later years in school with writing and thinking and their future lives as an adult through communication with other people and in forming their lives.