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Secondly, the practice of arts has also been proved as a developer of creative skills. Firstly, arts engages people to trust themselves and encourages them to express their views freely.Children that are encouraged to practice arts become more active and feel greater purposes in life. Also, arts practice motivates people to not only focus in their studies but in other areas of their lives as well. Secondly, recent research studies have shown that the practice of arts and its techniques expands the brain capacity of young children. Moreover, Anna Reyner an art therapist claims that by practicing arts, people develop cognitive, social and emotional skills; and some researchers have also pointed out the necessity of fomenting people’s creativity, because it is a vital skill for organizational adaptation and survival. Anna Reyner's Blog (http://artandcreativity.blogspot.com) is a fantastic website that exposes the benefits of practicing arts since a young age and also counts with general knowledge hand-outs that can be downloaded from there. Finally, people that practice some art techniques such as painting, drawing or sculpting continuously say that they have the sensation that they are more happy than people that do not, because they feel fulfilled and push their minds beyond limits.

The practive of arts has also been proved as a developer of creative skills. Firstly, arts engages people into trust themselves and encourages them to express their views freely.Children that are encouraged to practice arts become more active and feel greater purposes in life, motivating them to not only focus in their studies but in other areas of their lives as well. Secondly, recent research studies have shown that the practice of arts and its techniques expands the brain capacity of young children. Moreover, art therapist Anna Reyner claims that by practicing arts, people develop cognitive, social and emotional skills; and some researchers have also pointed out the necessity of fomenting people’s creativity, because it is a vital skill for organizational adaptation and survival. Anna Reyner's Blog (http://artandcreativity.blogspot.com) is a fantastic website that exposes the benefits of practicing arts since a young stage in life and also counts with general knowledge hand-outs that can be downloaded from there. Finally, people that practice some art techniques such as painting, drawing or sculpting continuously say that they have the sensation that they are more happy than people that do not, because they feel fulfilled and push their minds beyond limits.


 * Christina: **﻿ In the beginning there's a spelling mistake- 'practice' not 'practive'. In the phrase 'Firstly, arts engages people into trust themselves...', instead of INTO, I think it will be just fine saying 'arts engages people TO trust themselves.' Also, in the second sentence 'Children that...', I would separate the sentence into two parts. So, 'Children that are encouraged to practice arts become more active and feel greater purposes in life. ALSO, motivating them.....'. Lastly, the sentence 'Anna Reyner's Blog (http://artandcreativity.blogspot.com) is a fantastic website that exposes the benefits of practicing arts since a young stage in life and also...', I sort of don't understand what you mean about 'benefits of practicing arts SINCE A YOUNG STAGE IN LIFE....'. Do you mean 'fantastic website that provides benefits in practicing art at a young age...'? Other than that, I think you have provided enough information for our topic. Good job! =]

Francisca: Hahahaahah, i just noticed the spelling mistake " parctive" is not even a word! thank you sooooo much for your comments :) !

Jihye: Wow! I didn't noticed the spelling mistake as well. haha. The information in your paragraph seems to be reasonable and also I agree with Christina's ideas. :) I will just let you know to insert 'an' in front of 'art therapist' in the fourth sentence, :)